Monday 4 May 2020

gray white

the gray white shark some have blood on thir teeth they can small from a quarter of a mile they nose is on the sides 

1 comment:

  1. This is another good start to your writing Korben. Just check your spelling to make sure the words say what you want them to.
    Did you mean it is a GREAT white shark or a gray white shark?

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